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[My flash test]

Needs a lot of work

It was basically a slideshow. You need a lot more frames to make it animation. Even though most people will recognize Monty Python and the Holy Grail, it is proper to give credit for audio that you didn't personally create.

gangsterwithguns responds:

HEY man its my first one!
and read the Author Comments!

[Haven't Got A Prayer, pt2]

Went too far

The animation was decent, but a little wooden at times. The audio is a bit faint, I had to turn up my speakers, and I still couldn't understand some of what people said.
You had some good points and I saw where you were going (even if I didn't completely agree) right up until the end. The ending was just too much. It was disappointing since I felt like you just erased all the points you just had made by overdoing the last part.

Slackman responds:

I suppose I'm not the most subtle animator ever, and this was far from my most subtle piece. I guess I'll have to work on the animation a bit, and I really have to improve my audio. Sorry you didn't like the ending, but thanks for the review!

[Exodus Tyson Punched Out]

Maybe its just me

I just can't, find this funny. I think Mike Tyson deserves to be made fun of as much as possible, but this wasn't really about him. I can't help but feel bad for a little girl who died, no matter who her father is.
I'm not saying this should be blammed or anything of the sort, but I really wonder at why anyone would find it funny. That's my two cents.

[Kara Dioguardi badger]

Nice

Don't forget to give Weebl credit for the music. You put a lot of work into this, just make sure you give the right guy credit for his music.
The animation itself is nice. It looks like you put some work into this.

[Madness Retribution Pre.]

Not bad

Not great either, just a couple of short clips. The clips look good and the music fits.
One question... who's right to vote are you talking about? (If you don't get the joke, check the dictionary for "suffrage".)

FClock responds:

I didn't say suffrage... I said SUFFERAGE!!

[Saturday Morning Watchmen]

Really good parody

Like all parodies, this won't make a lot of sense if you're not familiar with the source. Rorschach petting two german shepherds and Ozymandias saving the comedian will only be understood as jokes if you have read the comic. Great humor and the animation matches the old Hanna-Barbera style.